Wednesday, October 7, 2009




Once we step up to the plate,
We ain't turing back.
'Cause we cant.
So make every second count to the fullest.

When you're down,
you've gotta learn to get up.
When you're behind,
you've gotta learn to get up to pace.

Don't give up.
Never give up.
'Cause when all things considered,
Fear is our only enemy.

It's not our opponent.
It's not yourself.
It's just fear holding us back.
So over come it and succeed your goal.

5 comments:

  1. This is a very nice poem. I like it because it relates to the poem because the guy is scared to preform but once he does say his rap he does very well untill he puts his hood up at the end

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  2. you mean it relates to the video right? yea, your welcome

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  3. ah yes thank you cael. what i meant to say was "i like it because it relates to the video" what would i ever do without you.

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  4. I like how this poem is about rapping, and you kind of said it in the poem like a rap. And you are a genius, despite spelling "turnin'" wrong.

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